WIP Opinions? Introspective -The Title (no vocals)

[Turtlesofthought]

Hey guys, I've been stalking GS for as long as I can remember, and finally decided to register - you can't beat the huge amount of helpful people (the kind and the blunt included), and I hope to hear opinions on a song I'm working on.

This is going to be called "Introspective" when it's done, and it's my favorite work in progress.

Please take a quick listen and give me any tips and opinions you have, I can take them!

Note
- This is made in Reason, so the fake guitar and bass will be replaced (I do reeeeally love my fake drums and would appreciate thoughts on making them more convincing!).

[hankdrummer]

who cares about real guitars ?
it sounds great this way !
with real guitars it would sound just like another green day style protools rock tune

[Turtlesofthought]

Thank you so much!
I've really been workin hard on making the obviously false sound real (the choruses are a decent example, put there's no way to fake the crunch of a good palm-mute).
I record a bunch of kids and singer-songwriter type of people who want to demo acoustic songs and hear them with the backdrop of a live band.
In comes reason to the rescue! As long as they can play to a click it's a match made in heaven.

[bkbirge]

Replace the drums with Sidstation clicks and clacks and add some Japanese girl singing and you'll have a hit. I do like the Nintendo feel of this and adding real guitars might take away from it.