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Please Critique - Rap/Pop song with over indulgent sexual lyrics!

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31st July 2009

dizzyd

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Please Critique - Rap/Pop song with over indulgent sexual lyrics!

I made this about 6 months ago, my first time ever trying to structure a whole song. Girl I was with didn't like the chorus at first, lol. All the drums and instruments are VST, played on my MIDI keyboard, vocals are all me. Mixing done in Cubase, got all my education from the gearslutz forums!

I'm looking for any tips, ranging from mixing advice, songwriting, performance, etc.

Thanks! Enjoy!

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