Input needed

[Mrfrenjen]

Hi yall
im new here but I would really apreciate some help/input on this tune im working on

EDIT: I uploaded a new version, help is very much appreciated


thanks!

[dim light]

I like the song and vocals

I would like if you added or made one of the instruments more in focus - now everything floats and it makes the song out of focus. The mix is a little muddy.

Good song, keep working

[Mrfrenjen]

ok, what would you suggest? maybe bringing the distorted rhodes up more and pushing that random percussive track back more?

also theres alot going on in the midrange...should I be cutting some frequencies? would that help clear up the mix?

Thanks for the help in advance...im obviously a severe novice

[Mrfrenjen]

I uploaded a new version, just bumping up the thread

[djui5]

What's going on with the kick drum?

I can see the direction you are going, you're just not there yet.

Might try working on that drum beat a little more. It sounds a little too obscure. The double triggering-stepping isn't working IMO.


Mix needs some definition also...it's more like a blur than a mix.