Feedback on a mix appreciated!!!

[Oh My!]

Here is my second ever mix. This is the follow up to the other track speechless. Same artist Lina Marie. All tracked and mixed by me. Let me know what u think feedback appreciated. The mix is not complete so far pretty much done with drums. Just workin on stringas guitar and vox now. Any tips appreciated.


http://zebox.com/cgi-bin/artists/dl....ible.m3u+qp+m3

[scruffydog]

Give me a chorus please...intro is wrong for the song..stopped listening at the second flute solo chorus bit..as would any pop mogul..
nice one
scruffy

[scruffydog]

Sorry to be a bit hard on your work in progress..
but your work is good..
it's just that you gotta work out the deatails after the song is written..
you don't get many chances to show a track in the real world so I thought I would just say it like it is..
If a pro listens to your track all the way through..he must be a friend!
often times if it goes tits up inside the first cycle..its out the window..
too many songs in this world..fact
But you are doing good basic production work..
Best wishes.
scruffydog