can you please tell me whats wrong?

mak · 5th June 2009

I did some various stuff, as I have loads of spare time (lost work) and trying to learn music writing/production.
Could you please tell me whats wrong , at least a comment from everyone will be excellent

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MAK

dafe · 5th June 2009

One by one.
You're doing very many different things musically which all sound interesting. It may be the best way to settle a bit, find sorta your home which doesn't mean you shouldn't visit other places. Just a gravity centre of approach, direction, not necessarily genre.
If you're sorted and some pieces come kind to a close, THEN I would worry about rec/mix stuff.

mak · 9th June 2009

Hi dafe
Thanx for your comment.
I am film editor by trade, and it's kind of hard to settle to one type

I am very much interested in the techincal aspects of production, and I would like to make soundtrack for some of my editing projects when no suitable is available.
I thought that it doesnts really matter what kind of music you're doing

mak · 18th June 2009

come on people
pls give me suggestions..

check on:

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Bflat · 23rd June 2009

IMO, your backline is taking over, needs to come down a bit. Work on the *flow* of the track more. When using MIDI adjust the attack and decay and try to make parts sound a bit more homogeneous, yet make sure each instrument has its own unique texture. Also, add some dynamics, and transitions.

Best of luck

meymia · 23rd June 2009

Nice jumpy tune...tho not evolving enough.

Great stereo image but lots of 250's 500's that need to be mellowed down.

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mak Gear interested Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 12 Thread Starter	can you please tell me whats wrong? I did some various stuff, as I have loads of spare time (lost work) and trying to learn music writing/production. Could you please tell me whats wrong , at least a comment from everyone will be excellent onemacedonia on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos MAK

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dafe Gear maniac Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Frumpburg Posts: 198	One by one. You're doing very many different things musically which all sound interesting. It may be the best way to settle a bit, find sorta your home which doesn't mean you shouldn't visit other places. Just a gravity centre of approach, direction, not necessarily genre. If you're sorted and some pieces come kind to a close, THEN I would worry about rec/mix stuff. __________________ This contribution was being morse coded with a torch into the chopped off end of a lightpipe ::

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mak Gear interested Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 12 Thread Starter	thanks Hi dafe Thanx for your comment. I am film editor by trade, and it's kind of hard to settle to one type I am very much interested in the techincal aspects of production, and I would like to make soundtrack for some of my editing projects when no suitable is available. I thought that it doesnts really matter what kind of music you're doing

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mak Gear interested Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 12 Thread Starter	cubase midi battery waves ssl c4 c1 l2 come on people pls give me suggestions.. check on: onemacedonia on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Videos

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meymia Lives for gear Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,151	Nice jumpy tune...tho not evolving enough. Great stereo image but lots of 250's 500's that need to be mellowed down. __________________ The outrun Pietro web site: http://outrunpietro.com/ Please vist my myspace at :http://www.myspace.com/outrunpietro Outrun pietro on facebook: http://www.facebook.com/pages/edit/?...1234254?v=info

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Bflat Gear nut Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 98	IMO, your backline is taking over, needs to come down a bit. Work on the flow of the track more. When using MIDI adjust the attack and decay and try to make parts sound a bit more homogeneous, yet make sure each instrument has its own unique texture. Also, add some dynamics, and transitions. Best of luck

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