EQ/Mix Suggestions on new tune "Get It Up"?

[Robertt8]

Hey guys!

I haven't posted here in a while, but i've been tweaking the living crap out of this song trying to get a good EQ and balance going and figured I'd hit you fine people up and see what you thought. Keep in mind that i need to record real drums, so that will make a bit of difference, but for the sake of "this should be possible" I'm trying to get a good mix with what I've got now. I always feel like there some serious mud I'm not sure if it's in the vocal, guitars, bass...or a bit of everything. Any suggestions?

http://bagoftoysmusic.com/get_it_up.mp3

Thanks!
Tait
Bag of Toys singer/songwriter dude

[slo77y]

i would lowcut the gtr (200hz) and eq the bass to a more low-endy type of thing. -6db @ 200hz q 2.0 for the bass and then +3-4db.

are there any drums beside the bd ? i cant hear any...

i think some room on the vocals would also be good

[Robertt8]

Thanks slo77y! I love getting specific frequency's and things to try. otherwise i'm just kind of plugging away in the dark. i'll give those a whirl.

cheers!
tait

[Robertt8]

any other suggestions to the mix before i let this thread dip off into the abyss?

thanks for listening people.

cheers!
tait