Loungey, lost my perspective, please critique!, thanks

[TopTomato]

I've completely lost it with this. Please critique, i need some input. I have almost no place else to go to for help with this.

Does the bottom end sound muddy?

The B mel., i'm feeling embarrased about it at this point, where as at first I thought it was great. That melody just popped into my head,

any comments at all would be helpful.



thanks y'all

[Dean Roddey]

It's not that bad. The bass is a bit muddy, though there's not much down there to compete with it, so it's not as bad as it might otherwise be. It's a little bright on my system. The snare, tamborine, and the reverbed wood block, all are a bit bright. Though just betting a more defined bass that's up more could end up offsetting that without changing them, I dunno. I'm listening on small speakers so there might have been a lot more bass down there I can't hear.

[TopTomato]

Thanks Dean,
every bit helps. you're right, too much high end and the bass is a little too undefined.