Mix/Production/Song critique.

[oded]

Hi Guys.

Here's a new song of my band - flow (our website).

I'd love to hear your opinion + critique on the mix and production in particular, but really anything you want to say is welcome!

"You"
http://www.karyan.co.il/stuff/you_mix1.mp3.

[Marando]

Wow... Great production and a real good singer!!

This song will find it's way to my portable mp3 player right now!

[Vum]

Are you the bass player?

Just kidding.

But, when the bass plays the repeated triplet fill when the full band comes in it is too loud. The backing guitars that are holding out the chords could come up a little more to get a touch closer to the vocal.

Apart from the bass straying here and there I think it sounds good!

[Peacock]

Originally Posted by oded

Hi Guys.

Here's a new song of my band - flow (our website).

I'd love to hear your opinion + critique on the mix and production in particular, but really anything you want to say is welcome!

"You"
http://www.karyan.co.il/stuff/you_mix1.mp3.

This is a good production and unique. I think the song could be made great by working on the melody. There are too many syllables in the verses/chourus melody and not enough repetition to make the melody something to remember (a unique melody). If a unique melody were added to this unique production a very cool song would emerge.