Hip Hop Version of Eleanor Rigby, Criticism/Input on the mix? Is it good to go?

[EasT]

Basically the topic in short..is of a young troubled woman getting caught up things that she shouldn't be and it winds up costing her, and just general things about the world within the second verse.

It's not like top notch equipment was used, i'm indie and an underground MC but I think the mix came out the greatest it could with what I've got and...not to make excuses for it cause I think it sounds pretty nice but any mix criticism is welcomed...try not to use preferences too much cause those are thing I most likely will not change due to it only being an opinion, if there is something that is definitely sticking out then that's what I will take into consideration.

It is in both mp3 streaming or wav format.

lossy, mp3, hit hi-fi to stream play

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=71776&songID=6973706


full wav:

http://rapidshare.com/files/15414814...r_LP_.wav.html

[geektanic08]

one thing, turn down the synth and turn up the violin sample. it's great!

[EasT]

Originally Posted by geektanic08

one thing, turn down the synth and turn up the violin sample. it's great!

Great suggestion man, I'm mixing it down right now and remastering it, turned out sounding great

Edit: I felt it best to start leaving the violin track raised half way through the first verse (and then it stay that way through the rest of its appearances) cause at the beginning it's faint and makes you wonder where it is and then it really kicks in and adds to the verses. I replaced all files above.