Please critique my new song

feedback711 · 8th November 2007

thank you

sctt_stone · 24th November 2007

You sound like a dumb- ass. Oh, yeah its rap so its supposed to sound stupid.
So i guess you did good.
As far as the music goes it sounds like LL cool J on crack-meets Wu-Tang.
Mix is good though. Is that what you want when you open your mouth?fuuck

butterfly · 25th November 2007

yip feeling u on this feedback, u got some talent to back up ur bullshit. May ur last thread rest in peace. Funny how the best stuff comes from a bit of pain, either that or u'r a good actor but anyway I've been there, have a whole pile of songs dedicated to a couple of "ex's". Beat sounds nice and I like ur flow. Mix is nice. As I said comes across as truthful.

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24th November 2007	#2
sctt_stone Lives for gear Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 2,147	You sound like a dumb- ass. Oh, yeah its rap so its supposed to sound stupid. So i guess you did good. As far as the music goes it sounds like LL cool J on crack-meets Wu-Tang. Mix is good though. Is that what you want when you open your mouth?fuuck

25th November 2007	#3
butterfly Lives for gear Joined: Aug 2004 Location: uk Posts: 1,279	yip feeling u on this feedback, u got some talent to back up ur bullshit. May ur last thread rest in peace. Funny how the best stuff comes from a bit of pain, either that or u'r a good actor but anyway I've been there, have a whole pile of songs dedicated to a couple of "ex's". Beat sounds nice and I like ur flow. Mix is nice. As I said comes across as truthful.