Does this sound completely amature

feedback711 · 22nd October 2007

Can you tell me whats wrong with it. does it sound like its not mixed right or does it sound like a hardware issue in the vox chain.
this track is not mastered yet.

feedback711 · 22nd October 2007

care to offer a opinion

Chris · 22nd October 2007

I think the lead vox need to be more up front. The thing on the left side is a little too loud, it's taking away from the lead.

I don't like the fade out at 2:25. I'd rather hear like, the choir vox hitting and then a good delay delays out. Then start it again.

Other than that it sounds great.

Also: Love the lyrics.

feedback711 · 22nd October 2007

Quote:

Originally Posted by Chris

I think the lead vox need to be more up front. The thing on the left side is a little too loud, it's taking away from the lead.

I don't like the fade out at 2:25. I'd rather hear like, the choir vox hitting and then a good delay delays out. Then start it again.

Other than that it sounds great.

Also: Love the lyrics.

yeah i wasnt sure if i needed to take his fills down more..

he did that as fillins between words i just processed em but i will probably bring the lead vox 1 db, take down the fills. and remove the fade and replace it with a good stereo delay..

awsome advice.......fresh ears do alota good

thanks

feedback711 · 23rd October 2007

lol

riecespieces · 28th October 2007

I dont mind the fadeout it just fades out way too quick.. I like the voxs on the hook and the scratches.. dont like the vocalist so it makes it hard to get into it... then again its sound retro kinda like hip hop or something lol

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riecespieces Gear addict Joined: Nov 2006 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 391	I dont mind the fadeout it just fades out way too quick.. I like the voxs on the hook and the scratches.. dont like the vocalist so it makes it hard to get into it... then again its sound retro kinda like hip hop or something lol __________________ Websites http://www.riecespieces.com

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22nd October 2007	#3
Chris Lives for gear Joined: Aug 2004 Location: Escaped from Slipperhell Posts: 1,697	I think the lead vox need to be more up front. The thing on the left side is a little too loud, it's taking away from the lead. I don't like the fade out at 2:25. I'd rather hear like, the choir vox hitting and then a good delay delays out. Then start it again. Other than that it sounds great. Also: Love the lyrics.