This song is a over a month in the works because our set days for my bandmate and I to get together are limited. Here's a link to it:
http://members.cox.net/fattmusiek/Th...0(192kbps).mp3
can also find it on the myspace page:
www.myspace.com/returnersmusic
(The first link is a higher quality mp3)
This is my first song recorded, mixed, and mastered within PT LE and my Digi 003 rack. I'm loving PT already. I'm playing drums, bass, and a few guitar tracks throughout the song. My friend is singing annd playing electric and acoustc guitars. I'd like to hear what you all have to say about it, even though it's pretty much the final mix; I COULD spend (more) weeks "perfecting" it but I don't know...perfection doesn't really exist to me. Instead I chose to marathon mix and get it out.
Here are the quickly typed lyrics:
he's a part of us
forever bound to us
shackled in the attic where it's dusty and dark
silently evaluating every remark
he picks up on my anger I can feel him draw near
baby youre in danger so you better steer clear
sugar please I try so hard
but the beast within is never far
where his shadow looms the flowers never bloom
this is my curse this is our doom
drifting in the wake of what i've said
the biggest of my problems lies in my head
I love you and I need you dont you ever forget
to lose you cause of him would be my biggest regret
sugar please I try so hard
but the beast inside is never far
where his shadow looms the flowers never bloom
this is my curse this is our doom
Dizzy when I hit you in your head
Thanks to those who listen and even more thanks to those who reply!