indie/classic rock tune

briefcasemanx · 20th April 2007

http://home.comcast.net/~briefcasema...w_eq_3_mp3.mp3

sock it to me.....one more time.

Junksiege · 20th April 2007

Thanks for the offering, I dig the genre for sure. This one gives me a Death Cab w/ more guitar play, impression.

I'm a hack myself, but FWIW, I find the song lacking punch or dynamics. The builds don't really build to anything bigger than whence they came. Sorry if that makes no sense.

I'd like to hear the vox more, I like them blended in there soft and mushy, but it's a bit too much of a strain to make out the lyrics.

The snare doesn't sit right with me for some reason, but I can't put my finger on it exactly. Seems a bit flat and dull, or maybe it's just the overall squashed feel to the entirety.

I've given it a couple listens now, and I'm going to say I like the tune...and I "think" the lyrics are good...

lpkyer · 21st April 2007

I'll like the track a lot I must say. The kick drum I am not a fan of though. The vocals could use a bit of delay/verb. Thats it. Great track !

bobwarren · 21st April 2007

I like the track. I think the vocal would serve the track better if panned closer to the center. Maybe bring the guitars down a bit to let the drums and bass have a voice. Just my opinion. Good job. What is the guitar signal chain. Any POD?

20th April 2007	#1
briefcasemanx Gear maniac Joined: Mar 2005 Posts: 283 Thread Starter	indie/classic rock tune http://home.comcast.net/~briefcasema...w_eq_3_mp3.mp3 sock it to me.....one more time.

20th April 2007	#2
Junksiege Gear Head Joined: Jun 2006 Location: SLC Posts: 40	Thanks for the offering, I dig the genre for sure. This one gives me a Death Cab w/ more guitar play, impression. I'm a hack myself, but FWIW, I find the song lacking punch or dynamics. The builds don't really build to anything bigger than whence they came. Sorry if that makes no sense. I'd like to hear the vox more, I like them blended in there soft and mushy, but it's a bit too much of a strain to make out the lyrics. The snare doesn't sit right with me for some reason, but I can't put my finger on it exactly. Seems a bit flat and dull, or maybe it's just the overall squashed feel to the entirety. I've given it a couple listens now, and I'm going to say I like the tune...and I "think" the lyrics are good... __________________ CJ www.professionalmenofleisure.com

21st April 2007	#3
lpkyer Lives for gear Joined: May 2006 Location: Montréal Posts: 1,809	I'll like the track a lot I must say. The kick drum I am not a fan of though. The vocals could use a bit of delay/verb. Thats it. Great track ! __________________ Louis

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21st April 2007	#4
bobwarren Lives for gear Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 903	I like the track. I think the vocal would serve the track better if panned closer to the center. Maybe bring the guitars down a bit to let the drums and bass have a voice. Just my opinion. Good job. What is the guitar signal chain. Any POD?