any thoughts on how to make my mix better

[yourmomsp]

http://www.ocf.berkeley.edu/~jerchen...somewhere3.mp3

any thoughts on how to make my mix better? Sometimes it sounds fine, sometimes it doesn't...i particular any suggestions how i could make the organs sound more "glorious" without making them sound "louder/in your face"

thanks.

[drakewire]

a mastering can tuck away everything and make it sound puurrrttyyy

here you go an example... Sorry I didnt take more time... But it improved it in my opinion...
http://www.nitroshare.com/v/4478899/.html

[FreeDanny]

Originally Posted by yourmomsp

http://www.ocf.berkeley.edu/~jerchen...somewhere3.mp3

any thoughts on how to make my mix better? Sometimes it sounds fine, sometimes it doesn't...i particular any suggestions how i could make the organs sound more "glorious" without making them sound "louder/in your face"

thanks.

Nice song thumbsup

Organ seems good to me too, maybe you can try adding some reverb and see if it's what you was looking for.

I would try adjusting:
- the vocals level during the duets, and maybe putting the female vocalist a little panned to the left during the first duet, then the male vocal panned a little to the left and the female vocal centered during the final duet... experiment and see if it is good or not (remember to check the mix in mono)
- the noise in the background
- "quantize" all instruments with editing because i thinks they need to sound just a little more "all together" :-)

But it is a good demo track

Bests
Danny