there is something strange about you.
first off, your songs are all complete in their current form.
they don't need "better singing" or "more structure".
they are done and shouldn't be compromised whatsoever.
secondly, you knowingly (or maybe not-so-knowingly) posted
these tracks in a recording forum wherein many would scrutinize
your music openly.
this, ideally, should always be a constructive process that helps the poster hone their craft and get an honest opinion.
all too often though, you see the opposite.
thirdly, and lastly, your music doesn't belong here.
i'm ecstatic to hear anything you post, but there must be a grander outlet for your talent.
have you considered posting to SoundCloud
this is one of many ways to promote your music.
i know this is a long post, but i can't help but try and understand the mystery that is musicmonster.
gearslutz is a great place for people to talk about, well...gear.
there is a new songwriting forum like you mentioned, but there are more ways to get yourself out there.
if you already are, i'd like to know where to look.
thank you for the music.
it has inspired me more than you know.