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Old 13th September 2012   #901
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My Demo!!

Please let me know what you think.

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Exelman - "Promise"

Just finished this one today.

Vocal and instrumental versions.

Would appreciate any feedback!

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http://soundcloud.com/exelman/promise

http://soundcloud.com/exelman/promise-instrumental-version
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http://soundcloud.com/colormecupid/little-girl
Pretty cool..Not my type of music so I can't go into detail, but in general it definitely works.
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Just finished this one today.

Vocal and instrumental versions.

Would appreciate any feedback!

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http://soundcloud.com/exelman/promise

http://soundcloud.com/exelman/promise-instrumental-version
Kinda reminds me of old New Order meets Depeche Mode. From a songwriting perspective I think you could beef it up lyrically but I like the production work.
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Brings to mind Marilyn Monroe - seductive. Great !
Wow thanks! That's a great reference
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Vocals are VERY Sultry in a good way. I think the song is way cool as well.
Thanks for the compliment on the vocals!

Actually, they were all recorded with the built-in microphone of a Macbook.
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Got 2 more done:

http://soundcloud.com/seanmormelo/maybe

http://soundcloud.com/seanmormelo/faithless-woman
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A finished track. Would love to hear your feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/lady-majestic/old-north-church
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Oooops...wrong version in the sound cloud. Here's the right one. Please tell me what you think

No Time to Say Goodbye (re-mixed and re-mastered) by Sick'n'Tired on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Nice pop tune and arrangement!
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A finished track. Would love to hear your feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/lady-majestic/old-north-church
Cool indie sounding vibe. A little hard to hear some of the lyrics, but overall nice job! Like the song.
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Good stuff! I hear a little John Mellencamp going on...
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Electro/dance popish

http://soundcloud.com/colormecupid/dirty-swing
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R&B ballad... http://soundcloud.com/voicegenius/not-like-you-demo
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What do you think?

Today I'll Be Five Years Old
http://soundcloud.com/driftlikeclouds/today-ill-be-five-years-old

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Nice pop tune and arrangement!
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Dare 15 - "Celebrating Diversity"

Hey all,

I just finished a piece for Freesound.org about diversity.
It's got metal, jazz, hip-hop, and a whole lotta weird.

Check it out and download if you like!

http://soundcloud.com/mojomills/dare-15-celebrating-diversity


Here's the Freesound Dare Forum link:

Dare 15 - "Celebrating Diversity"


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Here's a track that I recorded a while ago, with just an SM58. I record in a wooden shed in my garden, about 16 x 16 feet. At the time I was using a Behringer uca202 coming out of a Tascam Portastudio mk.III coupled with an M-Audio preamp (possibly the cheapest "interface" around). This was going into Audacity.

The drums are as basic as it gets (no toms, minimal cymbals), that's why one mic did the job. I positioned the 58 about 2 feet back, pointing between the snare and the kick drum. The kit is a Pearl Export, the only overdub I did drumwise was a few extra cymbal crashes.

I used my '96 Jazzmaster through a Fulltone GT500 into a Fender Princeton, again using the 58. There's about 5 or 6 guitar tracks, some with mild delay and chorus.

For vocals I put the 58 through an EHX Polychorus for the main vocals, any overdubs I did were put through a Nova Reverb pedal.

I'm pretty happy with how the song turned out, especially considering my setup at the time. There's a kinda evil Pixies/Autolux vibe to it.

Any feedback is very welcome!

Cheers,
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I have been seriously holed up in the studio. Writing and recording a real album...almost a rock opera.

Coming up for air.

Here is the sixth movement.

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Here's my newest recorded one. I'm 22 years old from Columbus, Ohio. Any criticism would be of help. There's one more on this page as well if anyone's interested, though a bit different.

Cheers. And thanks in advance.

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A finished track. Would love to hear your feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/lady-majestic/old-north-church
Good vibes here. Good job.
The voice (although sounding good) doesn't quite sit in there right. I wonder if you have trimmed off to much low end in an effort to fin some 'room' for it.

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Cool indie sounding vibe. A little hard to hear some of the lyrics, but overall nice job! Like the song.
Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it.

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Good vibes here. Good job.
The voice (although sounding good) doesn't quite sit in there right. I wonder if you have trimmed off to much low end in an effort to fin some 'room' for it.

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Thanks! Yeah, it was a real pain to mix this one.

Here are a couple other tracks to get a feel for the EP.

http://soundcloud.com/lady-majestic/against-my-better-judgment

http://soundcloud.com/lady-majestic/im-losing-you
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Here's a track that I recorded a while ago, with just an SM58. I record in a wooden shed in my garden, about 16 x 16 feet. At the time I was using a Behringer uca202 coming out of a Tascam Portastudio mk.III coupled with an M-Audio preamp (possibly the cheapest "interface" around). This was going into Audacity.

The drums are as basic as it gets (no toms, minimal cymbals), that's why one mic did the job. I positioned the 58 about 2 feet back, pointing between the snare and the kick drum. The kit is a Pearl Export, the only overdub I did drumwise was a few extra cymbal crashes.

I used my '96 Jazzmaster through a Fulltone GT500 into a Fender Princeton, again using the 58. There's about 5 or 6 guitar tracks, some with mild delay and chorus.

For vocals I put the 58 through an EHX Polychorus for the main vocals, any overdubs I did were put through a Nova Reverb pedal.

I'm pretty happy with how the song turned out, especially considering my setup at the time. There's a kinda evil Pixies/Autolux vibe to it.

Any feedback is very welcome!

Cheers,
Luke

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No Longer Silent Demo

http://soundcloud.com/silence-music/no-longer-silent-master2

here is a rough demo of my band. We are trying to improve our music, so any comments or criticism would be appreciated

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http://soundcloud.com/silence-music/no-longer-silent-master2

here is a rough demo of my band. We are trying to improve our music, so any comments or criticism would be appreciated

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Great tune - the chorus was excellent both vocally and musically. All the panning and vocal effects were well done too. Recording sounds really pro.
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I finished this demo. Would like to hear what you guys think.
http://soundcloud.com/yonatanpandelaki/once-again-work-in-progress

I wrote, played, recorded, and mixed it by myself. However i'm just a self taught mixer. Did i mix it right? Any input would be greatly appreciated.
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Old 27th September 2012   #929
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What colour is your raindrop

Dear all.

I am about to release my debut album "What colour is your raindrop" in November.
Would be wonderful to have you listen to a preview of it.

Instruments used on the record:
Sarangi,Harmonium,Charango,Ukulele,Mandolin,Guitar,Sarod,Oud,Drums,Bass,Tabla,Duduk,Oboe

Mixed by Fred White from the UK band Acoustic Alchemy. Recorded at HMV studios Calcutta.

http://soundcloud.com/tajdarjunaid

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Not sure if this is "finished" but here are a couple of demos. I use mostly all analog gear. Looking for some feedback.

Song 1. Asa by analogshinse on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Song 2. I feel so.. by analogshinse on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
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