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Old 18th July 2012   #691
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I recorded a demo of my song 2 years ago and I would love to hear some opinion on the song. The song is called "You see her smiling". Today I would record it with some better sound, but never mind

https://www.box.com/shared/xn307ekkpr

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Yes this is very, very nice (Beatles /Klaatu) song. You have collect all the manners that they had within one song. Nice chord progression, modulations, Ringo type drum fills, solo gtr sound/style, everything Sounds good to me. Love Beatles.
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Old 18th July 2012   #693
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This is a song me and my good friend recently recorded. Let me know if you guys dig it.
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This is a song me and my good friend recently recorded. Let me know if you guys dig it.
I dig it! Classic summer song

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I dig it! Classic summer song

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Yes this is very, very nice (Beatles /Klaatu) song. You have collect all the manners that they had within one song. Nice chord progression, modulations, Ringo type drum fills, solo gtr sound/style, everything Sounds good to me. Love Beatles.
Thank You very much. I didn't want to make it sound like The Beatles, but one thing led to another... It's a very nice compliment. Of course Klaatu too, I love some of the stuff they did
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Old 19th July 2012   #697
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Hi guys!

Finished a new song today, hope you like it

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Hello guys,
I recorded a demo of my song 2 years ago and I would love to hear some opinion on the song. The song is called "You see her smiling". Today I would record it with some better sound, but never mind

https://www.box.com/shared/xn307ekkpr
Classic!
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Old 20th July 2012   #699
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Hi guys! I just posted a 4 song demo of songs written and played by me on my bandcamp! I would love some feedback on the songwriting.

https://loshabaneros.bandcamp.com
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Game music demo

Hey everyone,

I just finished a medley of short clips to be used as a demo for game music/anime/etc.

Any feedback will be much appreciated (especially regarding the mix).

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/j_c-2/demo-1-master-strings-drumn
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First off...I just joined this site...what a kick ass group of people. Finally a place i fit in.
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Here's my a couple of my tracks...I just have a bandcamp and facebook. Feedback?
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Hey everyone,

I just finished a medley of short clips to be used as a demo for game music/anime/etc.

Any feedback will be much appreciated (especially regarding the mix).

Thanks in advance!

http://soundcloud.com/j_c-2/demo-1-master-strings-drumn
Sounds good. Nice variety.
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Latest one from me and my wife.
This is free for download on bandcamp (link below) if anyone is interested

http://soundcloud.com/speak-softly-1/broken-man

Comments welcome of course.
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Latest one from me and my wife.
Very interesting song and a wonderfully esoteric production.

I did find myself wanting to hear those excellent vocals up a smidge......maybe even just half a smidge.
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From the thread A Cover of Falling Up (Carl Craig rmx) by Theo Parrish (analog synth-heavy) on 2nd Jul 2012

hey guys, my brother and I just finished our cover of the Carl Craig remix of Theo Parrish's Falling Up. this track extensively features my modular (in particular my e340 and Pitts Delay), SH-101, Polysix, XBase 09, Simmons SDSV, x0xb0x, and a hoof shaker. thanks for listening. mixed and mastered by michael mccay.

http://soundcloud.com/ndn_gvr/falling-up-s-m-cover-carl

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Female urban pop.. I did this in 2008 then never bothered to shop to anyone. I guess I'm more interested in my own music

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Does this sound MUDDY to anyone? I got a good feeling about it in my studio, my car, and ipod, but listened to it just now on my folks' sound system at the cafe they own and it sounded pretty muddy to me.

I kinda freaked out and shut it off (there were customers there lol).

http://soundcloud.com/jasonlees/when-u-call-062312

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This is a song me and my good friend recently recorded. Let me know if you guys dig it.
That's nice man!! I dig it too. I like that percussive "breathe" hit and background vocals! Kinda reminds me of old Radiohead...or that 90's style harder alternative
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That's nice man!! I dig it too. I like that percussive "breathe" hit and background vocals! Kinda reminds me of old Radiohead...or that 90's style harder alternative
Thanks! I'll be posting another two today at some point!
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Two New finished demo's

Hope you enjoy
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File Type: mp3 Ballen Dave 1.0-REF.mp3 (6.83 MB, 11 views)
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Did this demo for my band last summer. Any thoughts?

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Old 24th July 2012   #712
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Finished a new song today, hope you like it

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Hi. Really digging the verse but u lost me at the chorus. In my opinion it needs something different. Keep it up

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Been Crazy busy but I'm gonna catch up!!
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This is a song me and my good friend recently recorded. Let me know if you guys dig it.
Good tune!

Lots of cool stuff going on throughout.......very dynamic.
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And while I'm here.......just finishing this one......

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Good tune!

Lots of cool stuff going on throughout.......very dynamic.
Thanks! Your songs awesome as well!
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Ambient krautrock - not for everybody's taste...

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Hi,

This is the first song I post on GS.
Hope you like it, would love to get advice about the mix.
Song written in about 1995 and 'finished' in 2012.
It's a Country Pop ballad turned New Wave.

http://soundcloud.com/electricthing/you-me

Couldn't get the embedded Soundcloudversion to work.

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Weird and I like it. I noticed you have more to share...
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And while I'm here.......just finishing this one......

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You have to listen to this one more than once to catch everything yet it weaves around and morphs, engaging.
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