Originally Posted by prontold
I really enjoyed it. Great work! The pre chorus and chorus are really great, sonic pleasure. The first time I listened, I thought the reverb on the guitar at the intro was a bit intrusive/dissonant. Some of the lyrics feel a bit awkward to me if I'm in critical mode, but overall I think it's a really good song and very well recorded/mixed/arranged.
Thanks for the great feedback!
I think you're right on the guitar reverb. At one point I thought the guitar was too dry, and then I overcompensated. I think I will tweak that some more.
I also agree on the lyrics. I can't tell if it's just that the way I'm singing them, or if I need to tighten up the timing, or the lyrics themselves. I have been considering re-recording the vocals for the verses again, although I'm happy enough with the chorus.
Mostly, I'm happy someone else enjoyed it because it's gotten to the point in it's life cycle where I listen and wonder what I was ever thinking! Thanks again for the feedback.