Creative commentary please

[scoob]

not 100% but 75% where i want it
opinions?

[scoob]

no opinions?

[ShamansDream]

Sorry, but rap's not my style but here goes...

A little to much 'in your face' on the backup vocals... The smeared Asian touch could be cleaner... Was it a long session? A little more life or emotion from the vocals would be good; foley fills could use a little extra 'briliance' and 'movement'. Some of the vocals seem they can't decide is they are song or rap. If this is a client, I'd probably invite for a fresh take. Just say you'd "like to get some 'doubling' effects to put into the mix"

...and I even listened twice

[Big 3rd]

Originally Posted by scoob

not 100% but 75% where i want it
opinions?

you say it's 75% there, what more are you trying to do to it? Then I will be able to touch on something that you maybe didn't consider.

[scoob]

Originally Posted by Big 3rd

you say it's 75% there, what more are you trying to do to it? Then I will be able to touch on something that you maybe didn't consider.

i've yet to nit pick with editing details such as out of place overdubs and adlibs more this is the mix directly after recording to get the genral idea of were i'm going to take it and what i'm going to do
gotta go back and automate reverb send and delays for a cleaner sound maybe some eq'ing monitor levels a little more closely get the vocal to sit back further