![]() | All Advertisers |
| | #1 |
| Gear interested Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 18
Thread Starter | Lyrics
If anyone knows of anyone who needs a verse/song(s) writing I am the best there is. I'm sure many of you seasoned proffessional will have heard this a thousand times but i'm absolutely serious. I need to raise cash for equipment so I am now willing to sell. Will also sell for an oppertunity in the industry. I don't want to give too much away, but ive developed a technique which takes the mystery out of why some rhymes sound great and others sound average. I can write lyrics from scratch or improve your lyrics using the same content. I am absolutley serious so if anyones interested drop me an email and let me know what your thinking. |
| | |
| | #2 |
| Lives for gear |
not for nothin but if an emcee used your service..he should then go home and shoot himself in the face with a large caliber weapon...no disrespect to you..do your thing
|
| | |
| | #3 |
| Gear interested Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 18
Thread Starter |
It's all about the end product is the way i look at it. Imagine this, maybe ill hit a nerve. You could be an mc with a great story to tell, sense of humour, distictive voice and a knock out delivery but you just dont have the skills to write em like i do. You could be transformed from being a good mc to a great mc.. and thats where the $$$$$$ are.
|
| | |
| | #4 |
| Lives for gear |
i feel what ur sayin and as i said its no disrespect to what you do...as an emcee myself i find it defeating the purpose of what an emcee is. to each his own i guess
|
| | |
| | #5 |
| Lives for gear |
wrong site
|
| | |
| | #6 | |
| Gear Guru Joined: Jun 2005 Location: Miami FL
Posts: 10,068
| Quote:
wrong angle, wrong approach, wrong deal, just wrong | |
| | |
| | #7 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Oct 2005
Posts: 1,465
|
a "technique" that makes rhymes sound good???? this is coming across like those psychic commercials, with the disclaimer "for entertainment only" at the bottom... i may actually consider paying you, just for the entertainment value of hearing what this mystical technique is... i say this honestly though-----like is the case with itunes, people buy after they've heard a snippett of the product----i think you should give an example, and if its that good, i think your chances will increase....
__________________ http://www.myspace.com/ericsanicola http://www.Twitter.com/eric_redone Coming Soon: SYCO -Cher LLoyd "Over the Moon" Out on Nickelodeon: COLUMBIA RECORDS: Big Time Rush "Halfway There." Out on ULTRA RECORDS :J Brazil "Girl I'm Tryin" Out on COLUMBIA RECORDS: Big Time Rush "City Is Ours" Out on DISNEY PEARL: "Yanni Voices" |
| | |
| | #8 | |
| Gear maniac Joined: Dec 2005
Posts: 167
| Quote:
| |
| | |
| | #9 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Jul 2004 Location: Nashville
Posts: 641
|
I'm curious, couldn't you use this lyrical prowess to come up with a name of your own?
__________________ http://pauldavid.us |
| | |
| | #10 |
| Gear interested Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 18
Thread Starter |
Wo, wo, wo i am being shot down! You guys should have been ripping my arm off to find out what I was talking about....but it seems like your egos have got in the way tutt. F**k it your loss. If someone wants to post half a verse up and let me do my thing on it, i'll do it for free, just to put to bed any suspicions I frontin. fuuck |
| | |
| | #11 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Dec 2005
Posts: 696
| ....
Can you improve on this..? Planet Earth was my place of birth Born to be the soul controller of the universe Besides the part of the map I hit first Any enviroment I can adapt when it gets worst The rough gets going, the going gets rough When I start flowing, the mic might bust The next state, will shake from the power I generate People in Cali used to think it was earthquakes 'Cause times was hard on the Boulevard So I vote God and never get scarred, i'm god But it seems like I'm locked in hell Looking over the edge but the R never fell A trip to slip 'cause my Nikes got grip Stand on my own two feet and come equipt Any stage I'm seen on, a mic I fiend on I stand alone and need nothing to lean on Going for self wit a long way to go So much to say but I still flow slow I come correct and I won't look back 'Cause it ain't where you're from, it's where you're at
__________________ COMING STRAIGHT OUTTA CONTEXT! |
| | |
| | #12 |
| Lives for gear |
what self-respecting emcee would actually do this!? this sounds f**kin absurd to me. Agzilla, dope verse i don't think it can be improved upon, especially by someone unfamiliar with your flow. |
| | |
| | #13 |
| Lives for gear |
Verse 2] Its not a Vietnam song I know women from desert storm who came back deformed Missin limbs and disease and they legs is numb Chemicals twice as strong as agent orange Its messages in the bass drum War goin off in your mind No man is safe from Its not a Game Boy about the PlayStation Its +Resident Evil+ when every President's a mason Robbin y'all fools like ? And y'all inherited roots and don't know how to retrace them Place them back Face them facts Disgraceful, faceless, tasteless acts Pharoahe takes teh authorities to court Peep crime before it happens like +Minority Report+ And I will never be mentally defenseless Cats be on the block, in the hood in the trenches sayin [Monch] {Crowd [Y'all ready to rock?] {We ready to rock [Y'all ready to roll?] {We ready to roll [Hook 3] My life is all I have to give Please lord forgive me for my sins My life is all I have to give
__________________ : : c o n ? o n e : : www.conone.net www.myspace.com/conone |
| | |
| | #14 |
| Gear nut Joined: Nov 2005 Location: Chicago, IL
Posts: 87
|
*Grabs popcorn, and pulls up a seat, just like yesterday* |
| | |
| | #15 |
| Gear nut Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 116
|
can you rhyme the words orange, silver and purple or is that too difficult?
|
| | |
| | #16 |
| Gear interested Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 18
Thread Starter |
Sorry guys i didnt realise i was causin such a fuss. Alright, im gonna whip up something real quick now, so grab that popcorn, pull up that seat, because the show about to begin. fuuck
|
| | |
| | #17 |
| Gear interested Joined: Feb 2006
Posts: 18
Thread Starter |
Here's watch you've all been waiting for. If you wanna rhyme send me a private message so no one has to know. When paid, i'll spend a lot more time on them producing much more thorough results. I can work with any flow and content. Enjoy.... Yo, Im gon work till, my face in purpil You could kill me but ill smirk still Walking with a straight strut part is just part of my make up I bit like them fake sluts after the bracelets Face in make up, she’ll let you drill her Not me, Ill KILL ye for that silver. You aint hip hop, you don’t own me I’m the ONLY you cant clone me So where the next testimony callin me a phoney? You wanna rhyme email don’t phone me F**k it be a bitch, post a whinge sayin “you cant rhyme oringe” My rhymes a bit like your mother cause it swings A pain in your ass cos this shit clings You’ve just found out I can rhyme and OUCH it stings |
| | |
| | #18 | |
| Gear addict Joined: Mar 2005
Posts: 434
| Quote:
pharoahe is just plain nice man | |
| | |
| | #19 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Mar 2005 Location: New York, NY
Posts: 2,845
|
Wait for FAB's new mixtape. It is going to be SICK!!!! He is just killin it these days.
|
| | |
| | #20 | |
| Gear addict Joined: Mar 2005
Posts: 434
| Quote:
| |
| | |
| | #21 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Mar 2005 Location: New York, NY
Posts: 2,845
|
Fabolous
|
| | |
| | #22 | |
| Gear nut Joined: Dec 2005 Location: Brooklyn,N.Y.
Posts: 125
| Quote:
www.booblades.com | |
| | |
| | #23 | |
| Gear maniac Joined: Dec 2005 Location: Saint Petersburg, FL
Posts: 256
| Quote:
Joe Budden is also spitting some heat lately too... sorry this is off topic but... had to say that | |
| | |
| | #24 |
| Gear maniac Joined: Dec 2005
Posts: 167
|
methodman gets the "nigga PLEASE" award of the year
|
| | |
| | #25 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Nov 2005 Location: New Jersey
Posts: 735
|
There are so many techniques for writing ryhmes. Although the delivery -flow- is the key in this matter... Look at Mike Jones! Marketing... There are E-books on ryhming better, but its more to it than just ryhming. Character... The character of an artist can prolong their career. Look at MISSY Elliot, Multi-Platium! Just because a artist has a top ten song or a good ablum doesn't mean it's going to sell.. Knowing when to release a ablum, is one marketing trick!
|
| | |
| | #26 |
| Lives for gear Joined: Oct 2005
Posts: 1,465
|
shrink shrink blinkity blink tryna make me think make me wanna vomit clean it up with comet earth's my "plonet" |
| | |
| | #27 | |
| Lives for gear Joined: Mar 2005 Location: New York, NY
Posts: 2,845
| Quote:
| |
| | |
New Reply
Facebook
Twitter
LinkedIn
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Similar Threads | ||||
| Thread | Thread starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Do you have to care about the songs lyrics or message to mix it? | Jules | Q & A with Dave Pensado | 16 | 26th September 2008 09:37 AM |
| Charts and Lyrics Handy? | vodka gimli | So much gear, so little time! | 0 | 27th February 2006 04:18 AM |
| lyrics ? does it sound right ? | lofi | So much gear, so little time! | 0 | 26th March 2005 12:06 AM |
| |