Originally Posted by max7777
Mix sounds cool (I'm assuming you're going for that Kanye vibe).
I think the song needs something more though. It would be best to either have the beat change a bit more or change your flow a little bit. Just sounds kinda monotonous. I love underground music & try to give everything a chance but I cut your song off during the 2nd verse.
If you can't (or don't want to) change the song then change the mix. Add some panning, drop outs, FX, or anything for that matter. Just something to keep people listening. This is a common mistake that we all have fallin victum to at some point. I made the same mistake on my first album. Won't happen on this 2nd album though.
I said all of this to help. I don't try to knock people down, its not my style. Hope you take this for what it is.