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26th March 2013
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My very first track

Hiho ppl

I am 21 y/o from Brazil, who used to be a drummer, but I dn't have time to play it anymore, so I started to learn ableton n stuff about 2-3 months ago, and now I just finished my original track, also my very first track. All ITB, just dropped it on the internet, and I wanna show it for you guys, what do you think about the mix/master? Any support will be highly appreciated, thanks.

Track name: Recoil

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28th March 2013
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Bump~~~No one? :( Just need some advice guys.
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I don't understand anything about this type of music, but judging by a quick listen (with really crappy headphones at school) it was pretty good for a first track. The mix sounded reasonably balanced. Musically it sounded like a very long intro, I was constantly waiting for the actual main riff/melody/chord progression/hook/whatever to start but it never did. So definitely work on that!

If I remember I'll give it a proper listen when I get home and can use some better monitoring equipment.
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28th March 2013
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this is awesome! and your first track? very well done. its unique. very creative. lots of rap artists would love this. only thing i can say is take it easy on the reverb!
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28th March 2013
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i like the idea, but it sounds a bit too polished. maybe dirty some things up a bit, that would be better, i guess.

but at the end of the day, good work!
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1st April 2013
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Thx guys! I'll definitely pay more attention on that, and cuz it was my first work, I just wanted to test my "production skills", so maybe I've had some lack of creativity for this one. But again, thx a lot for the comments
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This is some legit bass music Rdgnik. For your first track this is pretty ace. The trap kids will love this. Keep writing. You got the ear.
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