Liquid Dnb - Release your spirit

[Grindonthemind]

Musically, I think your production has some cool elements. Some nice transitions and synth sounds for sure.

I do think that the vocals are slightly out of tune and your mix/master needs some work to balance some elements more evenly. I have this problem sometimes and it really helps me to have a friend (someone musically inclined) listen to the track and offer some active input/tweaks on the mixing board.

You've got potential here though and I can tell you put some quality effort into this.

[subsonix]

yeah, the Baby D vocals and riffs are flat and the timing is out.

My advice would be to make the instrumental track stand up without them in it, so it's not relying so much on parts from someone elses work.

That way you can be sure that people like your track for your work not the track they know already.

You can then do your bootleg mix and hopefully the sum of the 2 is more than you started out with.

[risakczex]

Originally Posted by Grindonthemind

Musically, I think your production has some cool elements. Some nice transitions and synth sounds for sure.

I do think that the vocals are slightly out of tune and your mix/master needs some work to balance some elements more evenly. I have this problem sometimes and it really helps me to have a friend (someone musically inclined) listen to the track and offer some active input/tweaks on the mixing board.

You've got potential here though and I can tell you put some quality effort into this.

ohhh... potential? i didnt ever played any musical instrument now i am play on my keyboards like 2 or 3 months i got them on my birthday
but thank you )

[risakczex]

Originally Posted by subsonix

yeah, the Baby D vocals and riffs are flat and the timing is out.

My advice would be to make the instrumental track stand up without them in it, so it's not relying so much on parts from someone elses work.

That way you can be sure that people like your track for your work not the track they know already.

You can then do your bootleg mix and hopefully the sum of the 2 is more than you started out with.

i think Baby D vocals was ideal for my first attemp ) its smooth and have good tempo you just fit it to dnb tempo and there we go

so you tell there is some places false? :O :/

i think that instrumental version will be nothing without the best vocals :/ :(

its not mix... its just accapella and my acords, melody, pad, lead, bass, pluck