New track Feedback appreciated

[jeyque]

Hi,
Really enjoing the vibe of the track, the chords and the drums,
What comes to my mind as improvement is maybe to work out a bit the hihats and the high-freq. synths which stay in the same frequency range - but maybe it is just my ears
cheers, J.

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soundcloud.com/jeyque

[Kaoz]

Personally i'd re-evaluate that bass line at the start, some of the passing notes are clashing, it's also fairly quiet, possibly being masked by the synth above it?

[Headz51230]

The quietness is soundcloud...but yeah i thought the line was a bit off too..thanks!

[Headz51230]

Originally Posted by jeyque

Hi,
Really enjoing the vibe of the track, the chords and the drums,
What comes to my mind as improvement is maybe to work out a bit the hihats and the high-freq. synths which stay in the same frequency range - but maybe it is just my ears
cheers, J.

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soundcloud.com/jeyque

Soundcloud might of messed with it a bit, kinda did on this whole track now that I listen to it again. I'll check the wav file. Where would you cut the HH to make em sit better? Is the timing ok? I was sick of messing with a grid so played em by hand the whole way through..

[Headz51230]

Feedback acted upon, lemme know if it sounds better on your end? or worse..

[jeyque]

Yes, soundcloud converts everything to mp3 if I am not wrong,
I personally like the new version better,
It is more mellow, and actually the hihats are well distinguished, what probably kept my attention is the part after 2:40, where you have more synth playing together, Generally loving the track,
I hope this helps a bit...
greets, j.

[aaron aardvark]

Headz51230,
Thanks for the comments! According to maps.google, you are probably from Wisconsin or Washington. I was curious which one. OK, now your song: parts of this remind me of New Order (a compliment). If I had a gripe, I think it gets a bit muddy with so many things happening at once, at times. I think more simple could be mo better in this song (with the possible exception of adding good vocals). I still like it for the most part. I like the human chorus. Keep at it!