Sound Design Project

[Bigmouth Audio]

Hey, I think this is really good! Maybe just watch some of the dialogue panning, but that's just personal preference I guess. Nice work.

[JSt0rm]

The plane needs work. Start and take off into the by. It seems its just a by. Also you could of done something "cuter" here then a traditional plane by.

Same with that wheel thing. You use the same plane by for it. It should be a different sound and also have more then just the motor sound.

I would say over all you need more stuff in the track it felt dead in parts. Keep working.

[will_gates00000]

The timing was fine for the most part but a lot of the stuff sounded to close and to loud, the best foley work is when it's so subtle you don't consciously notice it because it seems so natural. Also don't think about how something sound in real life think about how it sound in a movie if that makes any sense. Good start though, I need to start doing that more often to keep my chops up.