do you think this chorus is hot ???

[controlvoltage]

Originally Posted by Dirty Halo

abusing the goodwill of the forum

..is job one, here at Koko Industries.

[moonK]

there's potential man! keep doing what you're doing!!

Just remember you're leaving your guard wide open to pros and non pros alike to some critical critiques. stand strong and stay motivated.

what inspired this track?

i actually kinda do like the tone of the voice. it's just lost in translation, probably sound cooler with his native tongue.

[rapandclap]

Originally Posted by moonK

there's potential man! keep doing what you're doing!!

Just remember you're leaving your guard wide open to pros and non pros alike to some critical critiques. stand strong and stay motivated.

what inspired this track?

i actually kinda do like the tone of the voice. it's just lost in translation, probably sound cooler with his native tongue.

thanks a lot !

[mpresev]

Good job..

[Simonator]

Originally Posted by moonK

Just remember you're leaving your guard wide open to pros and non pros alike to some critical critiques. stand strong and stay motivated.

Just to be clear, the only reason this guy is coming under flack is for constantly spamming the board with the same question. This is the FOURTH thread about this SAME song.

Everyone here is highly supportive; people can post up some dire ****, and we will treat them with full respect and say 'okay... this should be your next step to progress.'

Originally Posted by skanker

you say you only just started making music and thats obviously true but bare in mind that everybody who makes music was at this stage at some point.
if you have self belief and an appetite for hard work im sure it will all come together in the end.

[sic]

Exactly this.



.... However, if you make no effort to progress, and simply spam the board, trying to get attention, like you think you deserve the same fame as The Spice Girls & Peter Andre... except with some totally banal, badly produced excuse for pop music... then you are not going to get a warm reception.






...

[subaruturbo_18]

You're all slagging it off but these days if that had JLS or something written on it then it would fly off the shelves.


seems to me like the whole production sounds quite tinny. reduce the vocal levels a bit, clean up the pronunciations of the whole lot (just sing it over and over and don't try to sound american like so many do)

If it had a stronger beat to clarify its rhythm, perhaps a bit more modern bass it would sound less eighties

[rapandclap]

Originally Posted by subaruturbo_18

You're all slagging it off but these days if that had JLS or something written on it then it would fly off the shelves.


seems to me like the whole production sounds quite tinny. reduce the vocal levels a bit, clean up the pronunciations of the whole lot (just sing it over and over and don't try to sound american like so many do)

If it had a stronger beat to clarify its rhythm, perhaps a bit more modern bass it would sound less eighties

thanks a lot. do you have any idea of what kind of baseline that would actually fit in the whole rhythm? i don't have a clue about what baseline that would fit ?

[msl]

Originally Posted by Simonator

This is the FOURTH thread about this SAME song....

More like 8th or 9th, including deleted threads.

Fact of the matter is its sub par, you should work with an experienced producer to make the track for you and record your vocals. Or actually spend a few years learning to do it yourself.

[splitradix]

Koko Fresh Killa - Encyclopedia Dramatica

[Simonator]

Originally Posted by splitradix

Koko Fresh Killa - Encyclopedia Dramatica

Is this definitely the same guy?

[boon]

Originally Posted by NWSooner

How many times do we need this thread Koko?

There was this one:

Gasolina : electro or not ?

And then there was this one:

Do you think this voice has the potential to be on an electronic song ?

And there was this one:

Do you guys think this is a good chorus for an electro song ?

Fourth time's the charm?

(Oh, and to answer the original question... no.)

exactly.

where are the mods with the ban hammer? how many posts does this guy have to make before he gets a warning? i post a link to something and get warning.. this guy posts the same crap over and over again without reprimand

[rapandclap]

Originally Posted by boon

exactly.

where are the mods with the ban hammer? how many posts does this guy have to make before he gets a warning? i post a link to something and get warning.. this guy posts the same crap over and over again without reprimand

it's always another piece. i don't see what's so wrong with that? maybe it's just you being a dramaqueen

[WhiteSheets]

Originally Posted by rapandclap

it's always another piece . i don't see what's so wrong with that? maybe it's just you being a dramaqueen

So are you, or are you not, Koko Fresh Killa?

The suspense is killing me.

[rapandclap]

Originally Posted by WhiteSheets

So are you, or are you not, Koko Fresh Killa?

The suspense is killing me.

no. what a ridiculous name is koko fresh killa anyways.

[WhiteSheets]

What country are you from as a matter of interest?

[dhollmusik]

Originally Posted by rapandclap

no. what a ridiculous name is koko fresh killa anyways.

haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaha!


Comedy genius

[teknatronik]

dont let these forums become like the others with trolling. I say move on and hopefully a mod will see this.

I thought it was a serious enquiry as I havent seen the other posts. I feel dubed.

[rapandclap]

Originally Posted by teknatronik

dont let these forums become like the others with trolling. I say move on and hopefully a mod will see this.

I thought it was a serious enquiry as I havent seen the other posts. I feel dubed.

It is a serious inquiry! I've posted the song but this is a whole new beat including background vocals. I did post it here because I like the honest feedback. There were no intentions of spamming or trolling!

[3phase]

Originally Posted by rapandclap

yes english is a second language but his vocal is performed in a very cheap microphone and not mixed yet . he's singing :

you gonna love it
when i tie your body up
scream for mercy
there's gasolina in that cup
burn it down now
with your camel cigarette
it's a desert
fire flames around your bed

do you have any advice on which words he has to pronounce better ( if there are any of course ) ?

contemporary love songs? and the second verse is about what to do with that goat in the garden? top 10 ...