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Old 12th October 2012   #21
creegstor
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Dave.R View Post
you need to explain that
I would've thought it's pretty self-explanatory. There's a fundamental lack of prosody in the lyric to melody relationship. It hardly matters here as the melody needs to be completely changed anyway but such a disparity suggests it may be a particular weakness/gap in his understanding.
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