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You definitely can string language together but, from a songwriting perspective, we still have no idea of the appropriateness (or not!) of these words with music. There are many people who can write words well but cannot match the language of words to the language of music in a way that works. So without the context of music there's not much to go on.
Some nice lines though!
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