Pinkheadedbug, Like the groove you have going on there. Very smooth. It needs a stronger chorus. The songs has a great feel and vibe but there is no hook there that you can walk away from the song singing IMHO. Keep what you have a find a great hook to put in there. Nice work though. Oh and by the way, leave the horns out. It sounds nice with the sparse arrangement. Some BG Vox are a def need though. Good Luck.