turn down the hi hat
try re triggering the kick with a sample
work with a transient designer on the snare (try duplicating the snare, compress the shit out of one and and spike the attack up on the other one with a trans designer)
compress the vocals more. try a limiter as well.
wack up some 8k on the vox
try spiking an eq and sweeping the mids for the snare and kick. theres a few bad mid frequencys there.