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Old 15th April 2012   #3
butterfly
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Hi Simon,
only really got through the first track to be honest......which was called mankind and towards the end I became vaguely aware that this was also your chorus hook....but it kind if remained stubbornly submerged in the subterranean swamp of drums and guitars....which I liked by the way, my main problem was really I couldn't catch any of the lyrics so I had no idea what the song was about.....and thus I found myself not really caring.....which isn't a good thing when you're trying to grab peoples attention in an already saturated digital world. I would have to agree with sold soul's comments really......you do need some sort of hook. Sorry to be apparently negative.
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