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Lovely tune. Andreas' remark about the lead vocal is right. There is the notion of hands being cupped about the mouth in a small room. I suggest sweeping the 300 Hz to 600 Hz band, and suspect a not-so-narrow cut will be needed. After doing that, you may or may not need to bolster the 1.8 K to 3.6 K band, currently lacking, but that is key for intelligibility from a Wallmart ceiling speaker. The backgrounds are well enough sung that I'd have wished for a much less vocoder-like tuning treatment, but that is a creative choice naturally. I do feel the backgrounds have greater low mid band (again) thickness than needed.
Very nice overall however. Like it or not, we can't help respond when music is decently written and well sung and well played - as it is here.
John Caldwell
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