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Old 28th January 2012   #5
KGS
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Originally Posted by Timothy Lawler View Post
Very nice. I usually don't care too much for sample or midi or synth oriented productions but this has personality and expressive articulation in the sounds as well as a well balanced sonority. The trumpets from 1:22 - 1:45 are the only thing that sounds too artificially repetitive to me. A tiny bit of variance in the attack of just a couple of the prominent tones of those repeating figures would bring them to life.

I like Ves Paul's idea of bringing back the intro's first few bars as a more subtle ending.
Thanks for the comment. I've been very concerned about the trumpets on the track in general. I think that while the repetition does indeed not really hurt the track because they are "masked" by the other instruments, it is noticeable in that middle part of the piece. I think that I will manually record the trumpets for added variation.

I'm going to upload some original music soon too.
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