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Hi.. Welcome.
I like the overall perc feel to the start of the tune. I don't get much of a feel of structure progression with the tune, it kind of sounds like a demo tune you might get for a synth (many of which i really dig, but this is opposed to feeling like a song).
I think you need a small bit of swing or groove to the main kick / hat / snare pattern as it does feel very atari / computer gamey tight.
I really like the perc at the very start and the first 20 secs remind me of the Knight Rider theme tune!!!
I really dont like the string sound and part of its melody begins to grate after a while.
Although my comments might seem harsh or negative I actually really do like the piece. There is something that compells me to listen to it - cant quite put my finger on it though - maybe its the simplicity and spaciousness.
Good luck.
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