| nice overall... people have not touched on the vox much... there are some pitchy areas there... but also the vox are not big enough... not volume or EQ, but for this kind of stuff there is not enough stacking, and what is there is too obvious... the leads in the choruses are obviously doubled, but they also sound like it... it makes it hard for the listener to connect with you cause they feel like they are listening to 2 people singing... you really need to take one of the leads and make that "the lead" and then double/stack but push those back enough in the mix as not only thicken the lead without distracting from it... I also agree that the Guitars are not big enough... just keep stacking :)... as for the drums, I think you played them fine, but the choice of sounds/tuning is a bit off... they do sound boxy, too high, and thin... could be a mix thing, but most probably a tuning thing or tracking thing... and again, bigger, bigger, BIGGER... for everything... these kinds of songs are typically have simple arrangments/sounds, but all the sounds are BIG... be interesting to hear it once the rest of the band gets in on the action and they bring in their vibe into it...
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