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7th December 2005

#26

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Location: Miami, FL

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Chymer... I think the bridge is a bit to long. cut it in half : ) that´s it.. you lost me for 4 bars. The rest is great. good luck.

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7th December 2005	#26
Jose Mrochek Lives for gear Joined: Apr 2004 Location: Miami, FL Posts: 3,830	Chymer... I think the bridge is a bit to long. cut it in half : ) that´s it.. you lost me for 4 bars. The rest is great. good luck. __________________ www.thejoti.com www.myspace.com/thejoti http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sR116su2Uuo ¨But, then again, I'm British and think you Yanks with your fancy pre for each track are a bunch of weirdos¨ Mark