Hi there, sounds great
here are a few of two bit production ideas from a two bit producer
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Verse;
The palm mute riffing guitar tone doesn't quite work for me, maybe its just a POD thing.
The guitar riff/tone is clashin with the nasal tones in the vox in the verse in the second half.
What about keys? The right distorted organ patch could double/replace/comp some guitar parts giving the vox a bit more room, but keeping the riffy feel.
The stop-start/call-response feel of the riff could me accented more, either by muting or gating.
The two bars at the end of the verse are really cool, and the length of that section could be doubled the next time round.
Chorus
Great! the snare is way compressed though..need just a little more pop maybe, but I like it..
Middle 8
Once again I think some keys could really work...
Good luck and keep truckin!