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Originally Posted by chymer Hey,
just thought I'd post this song I wrote with an up and coming tweenie pop rocker, shes only 13yo. |
This song shows some potential, but IMHO as a producer, I think you could have pushed it a little more. The song is so perfectly generic that I can't figure out which songs on the OC I've heard the vocal hooks from.
Not meant as a cut at all, I'm actually quite impressed ... I'm sure this girl's other 13 year old friends listened to this and thought she was a genius.
I think the song lacks "edge" and not just from a production standpoint. The formula for this kind of girl-pop is: create something that sounds like everything else, but is just slightly different. I was waiting to hear the "slightly different".
I think you could even leave her vocals as is, and just run some more compelling instrumentals underneath. That'd do it for me.
Either way, good job and the best of luck to you both!
