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tnelson494 · 17th November 2005

Cool song. I'm still trying to do the same thing as you so take all my shit with a grain of salt (or whatever). Doubled vocal seems a little pitchy during the chorus and when the chorus comes in it seems like the bass drowns out the guitar and almost sucks the excitment out of the buildup. I'd like a brighter snare but that could just be me. Extra silence at the end could be cut but thats not a big just was waiting for something when I saw there was like 15 sec. after the song was done. A heavier guitar during the chorus would be cool but maybe just bass thing. Just little things I'm tossing out cause I love the power you convey with that tune. Love Tool and Circle you guys realy nail that vibe.

17th November 2005	#2
tnelson494 Gear Head Joined: Apr 2005 Location: Black river falls, WI Posts: 58	Cool song. I'm still trying to do the same thing as you so take all my shit with a grain of salt (or whatever). Doubled vocal seems a little pitchy during the chorus and when the chorus comes in it seems like the bass drowns out the guitar and almost sucks the excitment out of the buildup. I'd like a brighter snare but that could just be me. Extra silence at the end could be cut but thats not a big just was waiting for something when I saw there was like 15 sec. after the song was done. A heavier guitar during the chorus would be cool but maybe just bass thing. Just little things I'm tossing out cause I love the power you convey with that tune. Love Tool and Circle you guys realy nail that vibe. __________________ That is not dead which can not die and with strange eons even death may die....H.P. Lovecraft