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Ok, gave it a listen. The first that jumped out at me was the piano. It's a very nice line, with a nice color. I'd like to hear it louder. I'd also like to hear it played a little more dynamically. I suggest playing it while listening to the vocal so it compliments it.
The snare needs more mid body to it. The temptation is to make a really bright cracky snare all the time - but you didn't select a bright cracky snare and I think that was a good instinct. The snare needs more thump to it. Try eq'ing up the 300-400 zone, and turning down the snare level to compensate. If that doesn't work, you might have to split the bands and compress just the low mids and bring them up.
I disagree with Myams, I think the quantization is fine (on the drums at least, and the little koto harp thingy).
It lacks space and width - that's the biggest problem. And for that... well... that can only be figured out with experimenting, trial and error.
Nice work though!
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