| Its not the mix (you can deal with that later) you just gotta step your beat game up. Your drums as well as the music sounds quite quantized and not well arranged. Besides being overall boring production with lackluster sounds, you need to focus mroe on instrumentation- for example you use pizzis in a pretty akward way. The little ear candy synth you add is boring. Strings need to be played in each articulation at a time, or since I am assuming you are using a string pad type thing play it in with some swag and do not hard quantize.
On a general note about hard quantizing: not only does it make your tracks less exciting sounding, the frequencies and your overall volume get swallowed up when all your notes from various software instruments are hitting at the same time. |