| Thanks for the advice! By "Fresher Productions", do you simply mean better equipment?
No! A more up to date sound! But that is hard. Because I don't mean "go out and copy Timbaland". Make your own sound, but make it sound like 2009 and not underground like Atmosphere or other "underground" cats. Unless that's the sound you want!
This particular song was basically just to show lyrical skill and stamina. I do have "a point", but there are also a lot of little points that you will not get by listening to it once, and I understand that. I like making it so that the song has a lot of replay value because you can't get everything the first time around. The more you start to get what I'm saying, the more you can "get into" the song.
I'm sure it's some "deep shit" in your mind. But your point doesn't come across. At least not to me.. And I don't feel like listening to it again! Cause the production didn't do anything for me! Nor was there a hook that caught my attention or made your point clear! Had the production and/or a hook been dope (or present!) I probably would have listened to it again and caught all your small little points in time after several replays, which might have made it a really dope song as a whole!
I hope you don't take it personal. I tried to be constructive!
You got talent! But you need to think business if you wanna live off it (unfortunately)!
That's just my 2 cents! |