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Originally Posted by ISayItLikeItIs  Sounds like you know how to rap and write.
My advice (based on this one song): Get some fresher productions, start writing some good hooks, and write more focused. Your point (if you have any) gets lost in this track..
But that's if you want to try to live off it. If you wanna keep it "underground", keep doing what you're doing! |
Thanks for the advice! By "Fresher Productions", do you simply mean better equipment?
This particular song was basically just to show lyrical skill and stamina. I do have "a point", but there are also a lot of little points that you will not get by listening to it once, and I understand that. I like making it so that the song has a lot of replay value because you can't get everything the first time around. The more you start to get what I'm saying, the more you can "get into" the song.
I do understand though that people generally like to hear a good chorus. Next ones going to be just that.