[Stoox]

Here is a song i've written in the past two day...it still needs to be properly mixed but i'd like some feedback on the basic track and i was wondering if YOU hear anything that you think needs to be fixed or retracked.

the auto tune thing is a last minute thing i added. im not sure ill keep it.
also at the beginning i forgot to chop some amp nosie out..you can here where i hit the strings a little.

Everything recorded in my basement.
i played everything.

myspace.com/tstooksbury

EDIT:
i put up a better mix
not final still
vocals need to come up a bit