I like the intro
That's cool.
The vocals are sitting kinda low. Snare sounds good. Try putting some delay on the clean electric guitars. The distorted guitars are a bit loud and need some eq'ing. I also think you need some distorted chunks or something in the chorus to make the chorus bigger. It sounds kinda weak, and I'm not hearing anything that could be turned up to make it sound right.
Just my thoughts.
Love the song! Very "Cure" ish.