[Dean Roddey]

Hard to tell how it'll end up when it has the vocals, but I like it. It raw but not sloppy.

The bass is light, at least on my wee speakers. I'm assuming in a song like this the bass is relatively bright and so it's not because the bulk of it is too low for these speakers, so I assume it really actually is a little low. But at the speed of this song, more might be too much, I dunno. I do hear the growl of it, but not much body and punch.

In terms of content, I guess it could be a bit more original, I dunno. If someone had told me it was an early Green Day track I'd probably have believed it. Of course the vocal could always make the difference there. The guitar style in particular is definitely from that playbook.

Not that I'm blazing new stylistic trails myself, but I figured that's feedback you'd want.