[Peacock]

Originally Posted by oded

Hi Guys.

Here's a new song of my band - flow (our website).

I'd love to hear your opinion + critique on the mix and production in particular, but really anything you want to say is welcome!

"You"
http://www.karyan.co.il/stuff/you_mix1.mp3.

This is a good production and unique. I think the song could be made great by working on the melody. There are too many syllables in the verses/chourus melody and not enough repetition to make the melody something to remember (a unique melody). If a unique melody were added to this unique production a very cool song would emerge.