| I think its got a lot of potential. The problem with the song is more that you are from Florida and thats what you're representing. This needs something hot (something NEW and hot) that shows you're from Florida representing but also that your production skills cant be messed with.
The lyrics are there, the themes are there too, but the production lacks style.
If you had a Miami bass hihat or something DnB inspired, that would really liven the track up a bit.
This may sound messed up but, do you think someone would bump this in their car, coming into a parking lot, making an entrance with the way the track is set up now? No it needs more of the high end to break through all the bass thats going on.
just my opinion. |