Takin my first listen through...
There is a weird compression thing going on with overheads..or it's a room mic that's really compressed...or i could be just trippin..but I don't like it..sounds unnatural.
at 2:46...I can hear the gate/fade on the tom...and it's very unnatural also..s'ok to let those things ring a little after they're hit
Sounds like ur mixing audience perspective on the drums..but it sounds like the ride is too close to the middle..and gets a lot of attention..especially away from that main voc.
That tick Tick Tick thing on the hihat bugs me too
..sounds like ur automating it...
Overall it sounds pretty dull..I would add some shine to the overheads...then add some top end to the snare..cause it sounds like a box to me...and isn't hittin hard enough(whack!)..
Add some top end to those guitars...let them bite...because they are lacking shine also..
You could probably notch ur main vox up 2db...cause I'm not hearing the resonance of the notes(meaning volume too low)..I can hear the backrounds much better when it comes in on the chorus...
You might want to mess with puttin a little reverb on some stuff..like vocals...could be one of those instances where you can't tell it's there..but you can when it's not.
Again, biggest thing that bugs the hell out of me is that heavy heavy compression sound on the overheads..
hope this helps at all...
brian.