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But seriously, you shouldve ENDED this song at the start.
#1 you're doing the same guitar riff the whole entire time, minus the one time when you just slowly strum.....the same chord
#2 even IF you're singing style (if THATS what you want to call it) is to sing "in the back" of the band.....that DOESNT mean you have to set your mixes to shit, bring the vox forward in the mix, else people think you have nothing worth listening to if YOU dont believe it, self confidence....get it?
#3 to improve this song a small amount, I would try slowing the tempo down, especially if you want it to be a "folksy" tune
#4 there's a djembe in this song? didn't hear that at all.....maybe I need to hook up my subwoofers and crank it to 150db? might even be able to make out what the lyrics are saying in the "so called" verse
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